Recounts | Edited Recount

LI: to edit your practise recount.

This week for writing we had wrote another recount but has to be based on winning a sports competition. Mine was about our netball season in the afterschool netball comp. After our first recount we had learnt the marking criterias so we could try and improve on them. We had made an edited recount so we could see how we have improved. We had edited and added things that'll help our recounts get more points on the marking criterias.