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Wednesday, 6 September 2017

Persuasive Speech Plan

Persuasive speech plan

My topic: More theme parks in New Zealand
My argument:  We should have more theme parks not just Rainbows end
Audience: Government

How will you greet your audience? By introducing myself and greeting them.
How will you introduce your topic in a catchy way?We should not just have only one theme park in New Zealand.
Write a rhetorical question to make the audience think about your topic: If we had only like 3 theme parks will that make a change to your mind.
What is your opinion? Write a statement that clearly states your point of view: If we had more theme parks we won’t need to go to just one we could go to many more and enjoy lots more instead of Rainbow’s end.I am not saying to bust down Rainbow’s end i'm just saying to make more theme parks in New Zealand like GC (Gold Coast.)
List some facts or statistics that support your opinion: When you make more theme parks more people will come and enjoy their time having fun with family and friends at the other theme parks not just Rainbows end.
Do you have a solution to the problem?We should have more theme parks so people can not just spend money on Rainbow’s end and spend money on the other theme parks.
Say your opinion again and warn the audience what will happen if they don’t agree with your opinion. If you don’t agree with this then some people might stop coming to Rainbows End and go to different places that have theme parks.





Persuasive speech plan

My topic: Not need passports to travel the world
My argument:  We should not need passports to travel the world
Audience: Police, Government, Prime Minister

How will you greet your audience? By introducing myself and greeting them.
How will you introduce your topic in a catchy way?We should not need a passport to travel the world.
Write a rhetorical question to make the audience think about your topic: If we had no passports to travel the world how would it make you feel?
What is your opinion? Write a statement that clearly states your point of view: If we had passports it will be a while to make your passports and when you booked a plane to go somewhere across the world your passport is still getting made.
List some facts or statistics that support your opinion: When you go to the airport they should already know your information and have like a photo of you and your name and details.
Do you have a solution to the problem?We should have no passports we should just bring in our ID or Birth certificate to show the police and the airport.
Say your opinion again and warn the audience what will happen if they don’t agree with your opinion. If you don’t agree with this then some people will be missing their flights and have to be booking another day or time.



Persuasive speech plan

My topic: Alcohol free country
My argument:  New Zealand should be an alcohol free country
Audience: People who sell alcohol,People who drink alcohol and Adults.

How will you greet your audience? By introducing myself and greeting them.
How will you introduce your topic in a catchy way?
We should be an alcohol free country
Write a rhetorical question to make the audience think about your topic: How would you feel or think if New Zealand didn’t sell Alcohol.
What is your opinion? Write a statement that clearly states your point of view: We should be an alcohol free country so when young children grow up they don’t need to copy their mum or dad any family member that they see drinking alcohol.
List some facts or statistics that support your opinion: If you drink Alcohol you can get all weird and not think about what you are doing and just do things instead of thinking.
Alcohol is very unhealthy for your body and health.
When Adults drink alcohol you don’t think instead you just do whatever you want and forget what you were doing when you sleep the alcohol off.
Do you have a solution to the problem?
We should not sell alcohol in New Zealand and in all Countries.
Say your opinion again and warn the audience what will happen if they don’t agree with your opinion. We should be an alcohol free country so when young children grow up they don’t need to copy their mum or dad any family member that they see drinking alcohol. If you do drink alcohol your body and health will change and you might even hurt someone if you're drunk from drinking alcohol.




LI:To create a persuasive speech.I learnt that a persuasive speech needs to be clear and make sense.I learn t this by making three speech plans about three topics and brainstorming on padlet with my writing group (J.K Rowling.)

Kiwi Can - Self Control

                                           Kiwi Can
LI: What is self control and how to use it.I learnt that self control is when you control your emotions and what you do.I learnt this by going to kiwi can and playing games that had included Self control.We first played Bip Bop Bounce then we had to talk about where is any risky actions is in the school or around the school.The other game we played was called all aboard.All aboard is when you have a rope formed into a circle we had to figure a way to make all of us get into the rope.We put our whole body in the rope but that didn't turn out well so we had to discuss how to do it.We did not figure the answer so Mr Malu and Ms Latoya revealed the answer.They did not say our whole body they meant we need to be in the circle like put our hand or anything in the circle not our whole body.They made each level harder and harder.

Commenting

LI: To learn how to make a smart comment.Today i commented on Mele's blog post.She was talking about what she was doing in Kiwi Sport.They played a game called Octopus to develop their skills when they run.

Tuesday, 5 September 2017

Kate Shepard


LI: To make connections , Identify main ideas,summarise, evaluate and synthesise facts through learning conversations.I  learnt that Kate Shepard was the women who made wemen get a chance to vote.I learnt this by going on helpful Sites,Site 1,Site 2 and Site 3.